It is better to use impersonal phrases rather than>>>>> I think.....
- It is widely believed that......
- Most people consider that
- It is probeble/possible that....
- This evidence suggests that....
- However, if you want to present a minority point of view,......
- It can be argued that.....
- It has been suggested that....
- Some people believed that....
- It is generally agreed that.....
- A common viewpoint is that....
- Recent research has suggested that.....
The title below I put the advantages and disadvantages by separating into practicle and social advantages and disadvantages
Practicle advantage>>>convenient social advantage>>>afforable
Practicle disadvantage>>>unhealthy social disadvantage>>>taking over national culture and encourage obesity
For example:
Most people consider that fast food is the most convenient to buy and consume ,futhermore, the price is not expensive if compare with organic food. It is generally agreed that people can afforable. However it can be argued that fast food has less valuable in food, in addition it is taking over national food culture. It has been suggestesd that people who having a lot of fast foos or junk food, they have more risk chance to be an obesity.
1 comment:
indeed that is odd
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