Dilek homework

Summarise the sentence

Most people believed that the cause of death language is not from Englisg language but it depends on government in each countries had decided which language should be monolingual.

Appropriate sentence

It is better to use impersonal phrases rather than>>>>> I think.....

• It is widely believed that......


• Most people consider that


• It is probeble/possible that....


• This evidence suggests that....


• However, if you want to present a minority point of view,......


• It can be argued that.....


• It has been suggested that....


• Some people believed that....


• It is generally agreed that.....


• A common viewpoint is that....


• Recent research has suggested that.....

The title below I put the advantages and disadvantages by separating into practicle and social advantages and disadvantages

Practicle advantage>>>convenient social advantage>>>afforable

Practicle disadvantage>>>unhealthy social disadvantage>>>taking over national culture and encourage obesity

For example:

Most people consider that fast food is the most convenient to buy and consume ,futhermore, the price is not expensive if compare with organic food. It is generally agreed that people can afforable. However it can be argued that fast food has less valuable in food, in addition it is taking over national food culture. It has been suggestesd that people who having a lot of fast foos or junk food, they have more risk chance to be an obesity.

Summarise " More open trade raises income and the incomes of the poor"

Today I had to present and summaried the article " More open trade raises incomes and the incomes of the poor" I could listed the summaries as.....

In November,2001 World Bank in Doha, Qatar had agreement to support the economy and income of the country by unlocked low income countries out of rich country.There is a growing consensus that greater openness to tradional trade has a positive effect on country income.

The impact of freer trade on the incomes of the poor suggest that higher average incomes in country are generally associated with higher incomes of the poor this can like applies to incomes increase caused by more trade. However, success of international trade opening often affected by climate and quality of intituion and other factors so that means it cannot guarantee the outcome of the county becase it depends on the factors.

Feedback of my presentation

I think I need to improve speaking skill and more practice in presentation because during I was presenting, I was nervous and can't complied the sentence. So next presentation I must practice speaking as much as I can and memorize by heart.

Tips on effective listening

Friday 22 August 2008:

Dilek gave us a listening tips to succssful because next Thuseday we are having a lecture in Globalization topic. So we need to practice our listening.

Tops 10 way to listen lecture.

1. Choose to find the subject useful.

- The listener choose listena and attention to the main point and discover new knowlege.

2. Concentrate on the words and message.

-Attemp to pick the lecturer main idea.What is he/she saying.

3. If you cannot catch and really don't understand the lectures, TRY TO THINK CAREFULLY AND SLOWLY REACT.

- Don't skip your misunderstanding, try to continue listening and you will get more details.

4. Identify the "big ideas" a basic of the concept to which everything in the lecture is related.

- the listener should try to understand the concept then grab the key idea and point of the whole lecture.

5. Flexible in note-taking.

-Adjust your note-taking to the organizational pattern used by the lecturer.

6. Stay attentive.

- Remain concentrated and try to absorb the materail.

7. Aggressively tackle difficult material.

-They ensure interested in the subject and find another way making understand and find a challenge in grasping the meaning of what is being said .

8. Don't get derailed by emotionally charged "buzz" words that trigger negative responses.

- Dont make the noise from baggage and disturb other people that make concentrate lost.

9. Get to know the professor personally.

- Pick up inetresting fects about lecturer sucha s personal life.

10. Understand and use the differential between the speed of speaking and the speed of thinking.

• Riding the crest of the wave by trying to anticipate the next point of the lecture.


• Evaluating what the lecturer is using for supporting evidence.


• Summarizing the lecture to themselves.

Interesting listening skill websites.

1. http://esl.about.com/od/englishlistening/English_Listening_Skills_and_ActivitiesEffective_Listening_Practice.htm


2. http://eslus.com/LESSONS/LISTEN/listen1.htm


3. http://www.esl-lab.com/

Collocation

I read an interesting article about business case study at bbc website then I done in the gap maker.

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/business/7573839.stm

Colocation vocabuaries in the article
1.analyst 2.availability, 3.fees 4.indication 5. job 6.period 7.potential 8. recovery 9.restructured 10.restructuring 11.sector 12. significant 13. sites 14 stabilised

• The significant in Event Marketing Management subject is creative and analyse the customer demand. Before I had decided to study Event Marketing, I've been looking for a job which can relate with event manager or origanizer. My main reason I would like to be a organiser, which create in wedding ceremony and food and beverage sector. Last a few period event organisation wasn't well known in the business but now Thai economy has risen and many brand product need to advertise and make brand products become popular. So they need event site to build the event campaign and the main point they give the high fees.

Usefel websites relate with my subject Event Management

This month I have a big assey writting in topic "Summarise the main effects of globalisation and discuss to what extent thery are beneficial to my subject area"


I have found some interesting websites which are relate with Event Marketing Management and globalisation.


I think about my asaay what should I write on and what topics I will give in the assey. I noted the topic I will put on...

1. Introduction>> What is the globalisation, give the defination first.


2. How event and globalisation related.


3. Example of Globalization Event.


4. Benefits and Drawnacks.

I think maybe this websites are useful to the assey

1. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Event_planning


2. http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/274351.stm


3. http://specialevents.com/corporate/meetings_global_trends_event/
4. http://www.austrade.gov.au/BCA-Business-Events/default.aspx

Welcome Manchester United Class

On Monday 18 August:



The first day of last month in Pre- sessional course in LondonMet, I've had same teacher who had ever taught me before and new teaher name Dilek. The first day had new projects both of full assey and presentation at the end of team.



Steve's clsass analzied the following sentences:



1.How would you EXPRESS THE ESSENCE of your subject? (I.E. Can you explain in one or two clear sentences what your subject is about?)



- My subject in the future is Event Marketing Management. It is suitable for the person who is aiming to work in events marketing, marketing events, event management, or related roles within corporate marketing departments.



2. The key concept of Event management.



- I am going to know how to seccessful in Event Marketing Management because I can learn both of maeket and management as the same times. As the purpose of LondonMet mentioned that "at senior level in the events industry, it is the event marketers who not only deliver marketing strategies, but also devise the event concepts. It is the events managers who deliver these concepts."



3. What is the ANALYTICAL FRAMEWORK of your subject (i.e. what modules would be taught on an undergraduate course)?



-Next team I need to study

• Event and Live Media Industries
  


• Events Marketing
  


• Managing the Service Sector
  


• Financing Events
  


• Research Methods for Leisure and Tourism

Those subjects are quite related the main undergraduate subject due to I was studying Hotel and Tourism Management. So I think I have a basic knowlege of Marketing and method for tourism.

Practising arguments and counter arguments

Today in the first class, Ian gave the exercise gow to write argrument and conter sentencs.
So I chose to rewrite number 5 and 8 at page41.

5) 'University education should be free for all' To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is widely believed that education is a universal right and that universities should therefore be open to all those who wish to undertake higer education studies. On the other hand, if the country has too many students, so universities cannot get all of students without tehm paying and universities should selected the students who have high enough level to study in.

8) ' The danger of the Internet are greater than the benefits it brings.' To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Although many people say that there are risks involved in using the internet, bit although an internet is useful for students and people who would like to search the acknowlege and finds benefit information, futhermore they can feel comfortable and realx in the same times with internet entertainment such as watching movie and listening radio or music. The user should use an internet in correct way.

Check academic words in Introdection

File produced at level 10

In ancient time, media didn't have a variety kinds of media ,for example television, radio and internet. People could only achieved the news and information from black and white television or listened voice drama and music from radio.
In the recent time medias are becoming influenced for new generations due to all of them can select what kinds of media they want to access. It is widely believed that dangerous behaviour are influenced from the present media. The number of people consider that some program of media both of television and internet are the sample of violent behaviour for the new generations. In 2007, in United State; students in the Virginia Tech university were shot by the gunman in the university, most people and policemen believed that the gunman had influenced from the movies which he had watched.
Whereas in this time medias has affected with people and youths, so the family would like to live in a safety world without influenced by the media, how the government and people can solve the problem in order to we can live in the safety media.

From the result, I know by myself I should more improve in writing and use academic words as much as I can. Some sentences were not clarify and reader didn't understand what did it mean.

Evaluate myself after seminar

After the seminar, I needed to evaluate what level i should to improve....

First of all, I needed to improve speaking skill because sometimes my colleagues didn't understand what did I say and I should to speak and give some opinions as much as I can, one of my classmate told me that I should speack much more in the classroom and communicated with another friends during the break. A day before seminar I prepared the information and resources from the newspaper and an internet, it helped me alot because I could reference and gave the accurate details and I though that I gave the clarify example, reasons and support the evidence.
In some sentences I used wrong grammar and arranged some words wrong, so I needed to read and practice more than usual.

Relative Clauses

Form of Relative Clause

How to form relative clauses in the sentence

• who
  subject or object pronoun for people
  I told you about the woman who lives next door.


• which
  subject or object pronoun for animals and things
  Do you see the cat which is lying on the roof?


• which
  referring to a whole sentence
  He couldn’t read which surprised me.


• whose
  possession for people animals and things
  Do you know the boy whose mother is a nurse?


• whom
  object pronoun for people, especially in non-defining relative clauses (in defining relative clauses we colloquially prefer who)
  I was invited by the professor whom I met at the conference.


• that
  subject or object pronoun for people, animals and things in defining relative clauses (who or which are also possible)
  I don’t like the table that stands in the kitchen.

Relative Adverbs

• when=in/on which
  refers to a time expression>>>the day when we met him


• where=in/at which
  refers to a place>>>the place where we met him


• why=for which
  refers to a reason>>>the reason why we met him

Defining Relative Clauses:
Defining relative clauses (also called identifying relative clauses or restrictive relative clauses) give detailed information defining a general term or expression. Defining relative clauses are not put in commas.

For example: I received a letter this morning which made me really happy.

Non-Defining Relative Clauses:
Non-defining relative clauses (also called non-identifying relative clauses or non-restrictive relative clauses) give additional information on something, but do not define it. Non-defining relative clauses are put in commas.

For example: My love friend, who lives in Thailand, is having a baby.

Website for practice Relative Clauses.

• http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/relative-clauses/exercises?09


• http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/relative-clauses/exercises?08


• http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/relative-clauses/exercises?04

If the students would like to learn more gramma and do the excercise, you can visit at http://www.ego4u.com/

CCTV and DNA database case

During this week in the class is talking about the sceiece technology topic, therefore, I would like to give the example of technology science case.

Since May,2007 the big head news on every newspapers were a daughter in McCanns falimly has been disappeared from the resort during their holidays. Until now the dectectives and policemen couldn't find the accurate evidence and criminal even they have been finding the evidence by science technology by CCTV and DNA data base.

First of all the detectives found the evidence by CCTV how the girl was disappeared from the room, had she been murder or kidnapping. After that the police checked DNA from her parents and compared with the evidences. Once a time Kate McCanns was accused that she killed her daughter but the DNA from evidence showns that she was innocent. Then all of detectives and police needed to find a new evidence around the suspect area and people.

Today headline on Metro newspaper has a new deatils about McCans case. From CCTV in Amsterdam, one girl showed on the screen looked like Madeleine McCaan ans also she called her name Maddie. So the police can get a new evidence from CCTV

It indicates that science technology has more useful for police ans detective, some people think that if the government install CCTV around the city even tube station, it will infringe the private life but in the opposit way the government concerns citizens safe life not focus on privacy.

In this case it can shows CCTV is handful for the police can get more evidence to find the pity girl who has been lost from parents.

Sources

http://www.metro.co.uk/news/article.html?in_article_id=65714&in_page_id=34

http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/newstopics/madeleinemccann/2508744/Madeleine-McCann-police-didn't-reveal-sighting-of-'Maddy'.html

Feedback in seminar

On Tuesday 5 August, 2008 at Ian class we had a seminar about CCTV and survillance.

We were talking about technology tagging, majority of people agreed that if person who are out on ex-convict, they dont need to put technology tagging because we believe that they are humans to us so the police don't need to put the tagging on criminal. As and alernative, the police can do frequent check up on the progress of he subjects.

CCTV( closed circuit television) in the bbc news said thathome CCTV can reduce the criminal activities. We can conclude that we prefer to have more CCTV placed in England because citizens need more safety in life and in public. Some people don't agree to have more CCTV due to the reason that hey need more private life and don't need somebody to track and look at them all the times. United Kingdom is popular and well known in CCV.

Finger print is accurate to identify criminal activities because such person has a unique finger and footprint. Each person has a different idea in which their importance differ.
5 people agreed that CCTV is the most important because CCTV operates 24 hours. Police can catch the criminal activities through CCTV. The police can also observe suspect situation, they can help and find the solutions immediately.
DNA database is suitable for serious criminal such as kiddnaping or rape criminal.
The police can identify the unique evidence such as hair or skin can proof everything.

Regarding the finger print, all of us decided that finger print is useful for future.
Since 28 April 2008, in UK need the application's finger print because they need to recognise personal detail in order to protect the criminal.

I think that in the future technology will develop and I hope the criminal will decrease and become peaceful as well.

Fighting crime with science seminar

On Friday 1 August,2008

We had a lecture about fight crime with science, we got more knowledge about how to proof the evidences from the murder or the person who done a mistake.
the policemen have a lot of sciences, materials and chemicals to find the evidence.
I’ve got the technical of police to find the evidences

1. DNA stand for Deoxyribonucleic acid, at the present time the police find the evidence department use DNA to find the evidence from the murder.
and it is surely to specific the murder because nobody has the same DNA except twin and parents. They can check from skins, blood and hair.

2. Footprint: are typically used by the prosecution to prove an individual committed a crime, or at least were present at the scene of a crime and could have committed it. Footprints are not as unique as a fingerprint or DNA evidence, but under the right circumstances, they can be enough for a criminal conviction. When the prosecution looks at a footprint as evidence of criminal activity. in the lib, I saw from the video lecture, the chemical use the black paper and then push the brush on the black paper and turn it back, during painting it use the chemical to make the foot mark appear after that wait time about 1 minute so the foot mark will appear on the paper.

3. CCTV (Closed-circuit television)is the use of video cameras to transmit a signal to a specific, limited set of monitors. In London has CCTV more than 4000 for looking around the city even on the road and tube stations. In each day our face are shown on the CCTV about 3000 times per day, it shows that in the city; everywhere has CCTV for look and protect the criminal and also it can identify the murder as well

4. Eyes Scan; it use in the building before enter in, id the eyes are not recognize by the memory, the scanner will reject immediately, I think it is good to protect the stranger and criminal because it can protect at the firs time.
During I was seeing the video lecture, I realized that every process in the lab for finding a evidence is carefully and seriously in order to correctly specific the murder